Comments on: (WIP) Suiren, Chapter Fourteen: [UNTITLED] Scene 4 – Incomplete Draft

By: paranoid android

paranoid android — Sun, 09 Aug 2009 01:13:49 +0000

Its hard to say as not much has been revealed of them in the canon-verse. Although since they only exist within one country, as opposed to running parrellel to ninja as an alternative military force as they do in Suiren, then I can only assume that Kishimoto has blessed either them or their land with some special qualities that discourage the neighbouring ninja villages from invading.

The manga is taking a break next week but I reckon by the week after that we should see a little of what powers they have(n’t). Until we see enough of Suiren samurai that we’re able to make a proper comparison, will probably be bit longer though.

By: shikomekidomi

shikomekidomi — Sat, 08 Aug 2009 09:32:13 +0000

Aaah, stupid homonyms. I meant to ‘our’, although I really should say to Eimii’s since hers are probably somewhat independent of any ideas that exist in the rambling comments section here.

By: shikomekidomi

shikomekidomi — Sat, 08 Aug 2009 09:30:27 +0000

Is that good news or not?
And how similar are they too are hypothetical samurai here (or do we need to see more of Suiren samurai to even compare)?

By: Black-Petal

Black-Petal — Sat, 08 Aug 2009 06:55:53 +0000

I bring news (for those who doesn’t already know).

Thought as much as I dislike the recent Naruto chapter and stopped reading them quite some weeks back I finally manned myself up and read them, and guess what ‘SPOILER WARNING’ in ch 456 samurai’s appear in the canon-verse.

By: shikome kido mi

shikome kido mi — Sat, 18 Apr 2009 05:50:50 +0000

Nevermind, I just reread their last scene and that indicates Hinata going to talk to Kurenai while Sakura stays at the castle.

By: shikome kido mi

shikome kido mi — Sat, 18 Apr 2009 00:53:11 +0000

While the one scowling IS Temari, we don’t know that the Hyuuga in question is Hinata yet, since I don’t recall being told that she and Sakura have rejoined Kurenai and there are others in that family.
Although, admittedly, it’s been some time since I read the last bit with Sakura and Hinata in it.

By: Guile

Guile — Fri, 17 Apr 2009 21:01:14 +0000

Entertaining, and I’m glad we’re getting back to the Sand Country trip, but it might be a little jarring going from Serious!Sasuke getting dragged off by ANBU to Temari watching daytime tv.

By: Phantasque

Phantasque — Thu, 16 Apr 2009 19:27:53 +0000

Ohhhhhhhh. Guess I read that wrong.

By: KeiGinya

KeiGinya — Thu, 16 Apr 2009 05:30:03 +0000

I feel your pain. My first FFnet project (still unposted) is currently stalled because I’m having trouble writing a certain character’s POV, though the story is a bit different since it’s written in Third Person Omniscient (which is HARD, since I usually write in the style Suiren is in more). I’m currently attempting to find his particular voice by writing a random story, as I thought the problem might be since I don’t have previous experience with him to fall back on. …think Itachi POV. :shudders:

And, um, I really don’t see the confusion with Hinata. She’s clearly not the one scowling — TEMARI is.

I somehow don’t get The Wheel of, joke though. I remember a Wheel of Fortune. Odd as I am, I can only think of ‘Pain’ when I see the cut-off word that begins with ‘P’.

There’s no mistakes I can spot but I just woke up so meh. ;P

By: ArjunaAnja

ArjunaAnja — Thu, 16 Apr 2009 00:44:48 +0000

LOL love the start.

Well Temari never really interacted with Hinata so she probably thinks all Hyuuga are the same. Won’t she have a surprise, plus it’ll be at least a few more days before Hinata can use her eyes. I’m guessing they won’t tell Temari that bit of information…

I’m hoping we’ll she hinata’s confrontation…hopefully she won’t chicken out…she might surprise us…maybe Sakura’s constant teasing will do her some good here and give her some confidence…hopefully…