Comments on: (WIP) Suiren, Chapter Fourteen: [UNTITLED] Scene 2 – Complete Draft http://eimii.wordpress.com/2009/03/01/wip-suiren-fourteen-untitled-scene-2-incomplete-draft/ Aaaaaw, isn't that cute... Wed, 09 Dec 2009 00:12:26 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: Eimii http://eimii.wordpress.com/2009/03/01/wip-suiren-fourteen-untitled-scene-2-incomplete-draft/#comment-428 Eimii Mon, 23 Mar 2009 18:22:59 +0000 http://eimii.wordpress.com/?p=164#comment-428 I actually had to go back and read the early chapters just to make sure that wasn't <i>really</i> all he did. I found that Kakashi does have a little more characterization that than in canon, but it was still hard to figure out what he would do in this situation... I actually had to go back and read the early chapters just to make sure that wasn’t really all he did. I found that Kakashi does have a little more characterization that than in canon, but it was still hard to figure out what he would do in this situation…

]]> By: ArjunaAnja http://eimii.wordpress.com/2009/03/01/wip-suiren-fourteen-untitled-scene-2-incomplete-draft/#comment-426 ArjunaAnja Sun, 22 Mar 2009 09:03:02 +0000 http://eimii.wordpress.com/?p=164#comment-426 Oh! I totally forgot about that! Did it get lost in the mail...lol i love seeing the laid back kakashi actually doing something other than reading porn and being late...well that's the stereotypical personality everyone writes about anyways. I'm so excited!...though i should probably go to sleep...wow 5:02am...ya... Oh! I totally forgot about that! Did it get lost in the mail…lol i love seeing the laid back kakashi actually doing something other than reading porn and being late…well that’s the stereotypical personality everyone writes about anyways.

I’m so excited!…though i should probably go to sleep…wow 5:02am…ya…

]]> By: Eimii http://eimii.wordpress.com/2009/03/01/wip-suiren-fourteen-untitled-scene-2-incomplete-draft/#comment-424 Eimii Sun, 22 Mar 2009 03:12:16 +0000 http://eimii.wordpress.com/?p=164#comment-424 ;) ;)

]]> By: Phantasque http://eimii.wordpress.com/2009/03/01/wip-suiren-fourteen-untitled-scene-2-incomplete-draft/#comment-420 Phantasque Sun, 22 Mar 2009 02:17:05 +0000 http://eimii.wordpress.com/?p=164#comment-420 I can't believe this just struck me now, but didn't Kakashi get Sakura's letter - the one telling him to not be shocked about her "quitting"? I can’t believe this just struck me now, but didn’t Kakashi get Sakura’s letter – the one telling him to not be shocked about her “quitting”?

]]> By: Eimii http://eimii.wordpress.com/2009/03/01/wip-suiren-fourteen-untitled-scene-2-incomplete-draft/#comment-376 Eimii Wed, 11 Mar 2009 00:32:34 +0000 http://eimii.wordpress.com/?p=164#comment-376 Ino wasn't there, just Sasuke. He wasn't exactly pleased by the mention of his brother, and even less pleased that Asuma mentioned him, Orochimaru and Sakura in the same breath ^_^;... Ino wasn’t there, just Sasuke. He wasn’t exactly pleased by the mention of his brother, and even less pleased that Asuma mentioned him, Orochimaru and Sakura in the same breath ^_^;…

]]> By: Eimii http://eimii.wordpress.com/2009/03/01/wip-suiren-fourteen-untitled-scene-2-incomplete-draft/#comment-375 Eimii Wed, 11 Mar 2009 00:30:03 +0000 http://eimii.wordpress.com/?p=164#comment-375 Well, Temari's a smart girl... but Sakura was also pretty pathetic the last time Temari saw her - or at least the last time Temari <i>remembers</i> seeing her, since Sakura was wearing a mask back when she and Temari fought in the forest. Pink hair is pretty uncommon, so she might make a connection of some sort, but there's a good chance it wouldn't be the <i>correct</i> connection... Well, Temari’s a smart girl… but Sakura was also pretty pathetic the last time Temari saw her – or at least the last time Temari remembers seeing her, since Sakura was wearing a mask back when she and Temari fought in the forest. Pink hair is pretty uncommon, so she might make a connection of some sort, but there’s a good chance it wouldn’t be the correct connection…

]]> By: Eimii http://eimii.wordpress.com/2009/03/01/wip-suiren-fourteen-untitled-scene-2-incomplete-draft/#comment-374 Eimii Wed, 11 Mar 2009 00:26:50 +0000 http://eimii.wordpress.com/?p=164#comment-374 Hmm... since i actually know how it works, i dunno if i should get into this conversation O_o;... Hmm… since i actually know how it works, i dunno if i should get into this conversation O_o;…

]]> By: ArjunaAnja http://eimii.wordpress.com/2009/03/01/wip-suiren-fourteen-untitled-scene-2-incomplete-draft/#comment-372 ArjunaAnja Tue, 10 Mar 2009 20:27:00 +0000 http://eimii.wordpress.com/?p=164#comment-372 Ahah! I totally forgot Temari was with Kurenai already...lol on that note i wonder if Temari will connect out the figure in her dreams to be Sakura...*grins evilly* I can't wait to see Sakura's reaction to seeing her again. Ahah! I totally forgot Temari was with Kurenai already…lol
on that note i wonder if Temari will connect out the figure in her dreams to be Sakura…*grins evilly* I can’t wait to see Sakura’s reaction to seeing her again.

]]> By: Black-Petal http://eimii.wordpress.com/2009/03/01/wip-suiren-fourteen-untitled-scene-2-incomplete-draft/#comment-371 Black-Petal Tue, 10 Mar 2009 12:25:09 +0000 http://eimii.wordpress.com/?p=164#comment-371 Me neither I was taking about the comming chapters. I can be patient, and I also think such development should take some time. Sasuke's pride seems to get in the way. He has real issues when it comes to other kids his age other than himself himself being/becoming stronger. Particullary when it comes to asking for help. He just sort of assumes that the powerfull adults will automaticly offer to teach him because of who he is. I think the only time he actually asks for help is during the tree climbing exercise, and look how that ended. Makes for good comedy though. Sasuke and Ino were also listening in? One of them (Ino)gasping makes mush more sense. Poor Sakura has no idea of what is awaiting her when she commes back :) Me neither I was taking about the comming chapters. I can be patient, and I also think such development should take some time.

Sasuke’s pride seems to get in the way. He has real issues when it comes to other kids his age other than himself himself being/becoming stronger. Particullary when it comes to asking for help. He just sort of assumes that the powerfull adults will automaticly offer to teach him because of who he is. I think the only time he actually asks for help is during the tree climbing exercise, and look how that ended. Makes for good comedy though.

Sasuke and Ino were also listening in? One of them (Ino)gasping makes mush more sense. Poor Sakura has no idea of what is awaiting her when she commes back :)

]]> By: Shikome Kido Mi http://eimii.wordpress.com/2009/03/01/wip-suiren-fourteen-untitled-scene-2-incomplete-draft/#comment-370 Shikome Kido Mi Tue, 10 Mar 2009 11:20:08 +0000 http://eimii.wordpress.com/?p=164#comment-370 In hunterxhunter, Biscuit of one of the main character's teachers who looks like a cute girl most of the time but is actually a somewhat old and ridiculously muscular woman. I think she squeaks by that rule by being a teacher and thus getting personally involved less often. Oh and I like the second one because it allows Asuma to explain his theory fully to the others and makes your next posted scene flow a bit better. In hunterxhunter, Biscuit of one of the main character’s teachers who looks like a cute girl most of the time but is actually a somewhat old and ridiculously muscular woman. I think she squeaks by that rule by being a teacher and thus getting personally involved less often.

Oh and I like the second one because it allows Asuma to explain his theory fully to the others and makes your next posted scene flow a bit better.

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