(WIP) Suiren, Chapter Fourteen: [UNTITLED] Scene 3 – Complete Draft?

Alright, for real this time… maybe; i’m still struggling with the fact that i’m not very interested in Sasuke myself, so i’m not sure if i can write him in a way that’s interesting for anyone else.
[RANT] On top of that, this scene has also made me remember what a stupid technique the Chidori is. It’s noisy and obvious, [...]

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(WIP) Suiren, Chapter Fourteen: [UNTITLED] Scene 3 – An Annoying Placeholder…

Surprise, no writing here yet! I’m just sticking up this placeholder for now because i’m still trying to decide whether to write the next section from Sasuke’s point of view or Ino’s. I try to write in third-person limited mode rather than third-person omnicient, so the character i choose as the ‘focus’ for a particular section [...]

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(WIP) Suiren, Chapter Fourteen: [UNTITLED] Scene 2.5 – A Brief Interlude…

There’s been some speculation about the events at the end of the last section, so while  i don’t have time to start writing the next section at this particular moment, i guess i can put up this little ‘bridge’ that goes between them. As usual, this is a Work In Progress, and thus subject to [...]

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(WIP) Suiren, Chapter Fourteen: [UNTITLED] Scene 2 – Complete Draft

Well, i promised that i’d have more writing up by today… and dammit, i do!
I can see you back there! Put away the torches and the barbecue sauce! The pitchforks you can keep – but no using them unless i get really lazy again!
I’m not done yet today, either, but since i am posting this [...]

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